Normally for Chuck's flash fiction challenge I'll crank something out before work on Friday. I really wanted to do something special for this one so you had to wait until Saturday. I think at 1067 words it was worth the wait:
“Happy thirteenth birthday, honey!”
“Thanks, Mom... You know what this means, don’t you?”
“Let’s not think about that now. Just enjoy today.”
“It’s not today that I worry about.”
“Tomorrow they’ll be here. It’s been our way for
generations.”
“As you say, Mother. Tomorrow, I’ll make you proud.”
She took Ojai’s cheeks in her hands and peered into his
eyes. “My sweet baby boy, I’ll be proud no matter the outcome. I know you’ll
represent our family with conviction and honor.”
“I will, mother.”
Ojai walked to the window facing the main spire of their
vast city. They lived on the hundredth floor – the top of the individual spires
that ringed the main citadel. They weren’t the most affluent in the tower they
resided – those people lived on one of the floors with a crosswalk linking each
tower. Five crosswalks linked each tower. The main spire stood as a testament
to their culture. The gleaming white tower reached to the heavens. It was so
massive, terse fibers anchored it to the craggy and rough ground. When law
enforcement wasn’t present, many youths would climb these to prove their
masculinity. These feats were unnecessary. Every male, the day following their
thirteenth birthday, were escorted to the main spire where their future would
be decided. Ojai knew his path held only two options – breeder or soldier. The
females wanted for nothing. They lived in the many towers encircling the
central spire. No males over the age of thirteen lived there. He knew his
future was in the central spire, chosen by a representative of the council of
matrons. Tomorrow would be the first day of the rest of his life.
***
“Ojai!”
“Ma’am?”
“We need to have a discussion.”
“As you wish, Mistress.”
“Mistress? Why so formal, Ojai?”
Ojai remained silent. He stood at attention of the division
commander’s desk.
“Ojai, you’ve been my subordinate for six years now. I would
think in all that time we would have developed a familiarity.”
Ojai relaxed and looked into the eyes of his commanding
officer and occasional lover, “Talia, I want more than this. I’ve served
faithfully and with exemption for years. There has to be more for me.”
Talia’s face softened. Ojai was one of her favorite lovers.
She knew he harbored no illusion it was an exclusive relationship – merely a
privilege of rank. “I’ve been asked to select one of you for a special
assignment.” A single tear welled up at the corner of her eye. They both
ignored it and she continued, “I will miss you, Ojai.”
Ojai took a step toward the desk, but a brief shake of her
head stopped his progress. She closed her eyes and spoke the last word they
would have between them: “Dismissed, soldier!”
***
“What the hades is it?”
“Unknown, but it’s on a collision course for the central
spire.”
Ojai stared at the screen with the brown mass growing
larger. It was spined, with deep ridges from the top to the bottom. The top
featured a stalk with wispy white tendrils sticking out in all directions.
“How much time have we got?”
“Two days at the most. We must act immediately.”
Ojai stood up straight. His back was starting to hurt. He
spent the better part of the last ten years looking over the shoulder of his
subordinates to see security screens. They featured a myriad of images – from
citizenry to the vast field separating the central spire from the ring of white
towers. This screen was looking outward and what he saw and heard worried him.
“Let her know I’m on my way.”
“Understood”
***
“I don’t know how we managed to get these top fifty levels
evacuated so fast!”
Kaemon glanced at Ojai through the visor of his helmet.
“This is nothing. We had an issue about forty-five years ago with some sort of
creepy landslide. It enveloped four or five perimeter towers up to the
thirtieth level. It missed the central spire, but on its movement it tore through
several tension fibers. We were worried about the structural integrity of the
spire. We had to evacuate something like twenty towers. The people were camped
out in the field for days while the crisis played itself out.”
“What was it?”
“We never found out. It rolled through leaving a sticky
residue in its wake.”
“Huh. Strange.”
“Yeah, one unlucky citizen was enveloped by it and became
trapped inside. We tried to get her out, but it was moving too rapidly for us
to free her. We were ordered to stop rescue efforts when it moved beyond the
other side of the city.”
Ojai looked up at the shadow casting darkness across the
great city he protected. Impact would be within minutes. They had done
everything they could to prepare, but they could only stand by helplessly
watching.
“Here it comes!”
The brown mass impacted the central spire between the two
hundred twenty-first and twenty-second levels. It looked as if they would need
to rebuild twenty-eight levels. The debris raining down fell onto the evacuated
field. The white building materials struck the tension fibers and littered the
ground. The unidentified mass ricocheted and continued on a different direction
away from the city. All things considered, this disaster was minor. They
wouldn’t know for a few hours, but Ojai suspected there would be no loss of
life.
Kaemon gripped Ojai’s shoulder. “We will persevere like we
have for generations. Come on, lets see if we can help out.”
Ojai smiled and followed Kaemon toward the spire. His life
had meaning and he felt fortunate this was his path – chosen the days following
his thirteenth birthday.
***
“Kayla! What are you doing?”
“Chasing a dandelion seed, daddy!”
Kayla’s father smiled at his daughter’s enthusiasm. “Be
careful! These woods have many hidden dangers.”
“Don’t worry, Daddy, I’ll be careful!”
She chased the dandelion seed until it struck a tree and
bounced off lazily. Her attention was no longer on the seed but on a strange
white object stuck on the side of the tree.
“Daddy, what’s this?”
Her father peered at the odd white web-thing with a central
spire and what looked like a webbed fence ringed around it.
“I’m not sure, but it’s best we leave it alone.”
Kayla took a final look at it before she and her father
turned and continued their trek through the woods onto destinations unknown.
What an interesting take on the concept. I really like the conversation parts of the story.
ReplyDeleteI've discovered that conversation is a great way to info-dump without, you know, info-dumoing. I'm glad you found it interesting.
ReplyDeleteI've only just started to read through the other stories, Mark. Glad I started with yours, but didnt read it before I did mine :)
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